Post details: Different version

12/11/06

Permalink Filed under: street photos Posted by simplephotography @ 12:42:03 am

Different version

One person on Pbase is very dear and valuable to me, and I kind of see him as a mentor. I've learned so much from him, and even though he's a splendid street photographer, he will look at each of my images and give his honest opinion, and often suggestions to improve. The suggestion he made, based on how I saw the image (Hitchcock), is to make it a vertical composition (more threatening) and to make the couple walk out of the frame. I think he was more than right with that suggestion. What do you think?

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Comment from: eyecatcher [Member] · http://www.eyecatcherphotography.be
According to me your pictures are much better than they used to be.
I think your mentor had a point here. There's only one small minus here: the open space in the right top corner. It's inevitable but a bit distracting. DOF and compo are great.

P.
Permalink 12/11/06 @ 01:25
Comment from: simplephotography [Member] · http://www.pbase.com/simplephotography
I know they are better. The reason behind that is that I leave my 300mm lens where it belongs for street shots: at home.
I have evolved to shooting scenes rather than people. Interesting places, where I try to give every person its own, valuable spot. I will post an image, which, to my mentor's opinion, is the best composition I've ever done. It features four people, each in a different place in the image, and each at a different depth in the field. I shot it at 28mm, which unfortunately is the widest angle I have at this moment (and with the crop factor, it's even more).
I'd like you to judge that one too.
Permalink 12/11/06 @ 01:29
Comment from: simplephotography [Member] · http://www.pbase.com/simplephotography
Right. I already posted it. It's the post titled "Skaters".
Permalink 12/11/06 @ 01:32
Comment from: conglom [Member] · http://www.artistlies.com
I disagree with the suggestion on this image. I think the new crop basically takes the people out of the picture already -- whereas before, they are surrounded by birds, now they're just an afterthought in an image of a few birds flying the other direction. It does not look more threatening, because the people are about to escape (and appear not to notice the birds anyway).

In the other image, they are still oblivious, but they are surrounded. That is what makes the picture so interesting...how can they NOT notice all the commotion of the birds? What are they talking about? They should be ducking, taking cover, or at least watching, the flight...but instead they're surrounded by chaos, but unaffected by it.

I think the full image is much more powerful. That said, I still like this one...you have a good enough image here that you have a lot of options with how to treat it.
Permalink 12/11/06 @ 12:26
Comment from: martin [Member] · http://www.theurbanlandscape.co.uk
nice, well captured image, but i have to say the previous uncropped version is by far better.
Permalink 12/11/06 @ 13:52
Comment from: eyecatcher [Member] · http://www.eyecatcherphotography.be
I think any lens can do SP, but you're doing better with the recent choices you made.

P.
Permalink 12/11/06 @ 15:10
Comment from: simplephotography [Member] · http://www.pbase.com/simplephotography
Thanks my friend. It's much appreciated.
Permalink 12/11/06 @ 23:32
Comment from: conglom [Member] · http://www.artistlies.com
I agree with EC...your pictures are vastly better.

Its kind of intimidating actually. :)
Permalink 12/12/06 @ 00:32

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